My Ideal Reader

When writing my first draft my ideal reader would have to be my English teacher Mrs.Perry. She is the only person who normally reads my paper. I find her to be my ideal reader because she always marks my papers with allot of correction and leaves little hurtful notes at the end of my essays telling me how my essay was. she is truthful and also hurtful! but I guess she wouldn't be helping me if she wasn't telling me the way she feels about my paper. Mrs.Perry little comments are always helpful they correct my mistakes so i wont make them next time I write a paper. A Texas Aggie's graduate opinion is most likely right!

Negro Women Blues

Oh I got the blues..

The black women blues..

I ain't got no momma

No grandma

No dog oh.. I got the black women blues

I can't find me a hubby that I lovvy

No man ever listen to de black woman

Oh I got the Negro women blues!

(I really hope I did this right)

Years To Come

"There are years that ask questions and years that answer."  Write a speculative response on what the upcoming year will hold for Janie.  Will this year be the year that asks questions or one that answers them?  Will this be the year that does both?  Respond to at least three peers.

Janie upcoming years will all be the same a year of answering and question. the years that goes by answer questions though of from the year  before. questions are brought up over time they never cease in being created. Janie has made choices that she doesn't know are the best choices but will find out when time comes about.

Janie following years will also come up with new questions. the year Janie is in now has answered questions from the year before she never new  when her grandmother will die but she will find out when years come. the years will always be the same they will always be years of answering and question.

Between Two People

Marriage is a wonderful lovable idea of taking the next step with the person you love and have strong feelings for. Unfortunately some families don't exactly agree with the person we choose to marry. it doesn't matter though. your family should love you no matter what. if your whole family hates your future wife or husband it should no matter there is a reason you yourself chose that person to be forever yours. its your marriage not theirs. the approval of the family is just a benefit to the marriage not nessecarly a requirement.

 A marrage is between two people not two people and the family. love between two people is hard fopr others with hatred in there eyes to undersand. married copples always tend to have atleast one unhappy relative because of the marriage but that doesint stop them form getting married. marriage is a huge step that should not be interupted if the faimly does not like the other.

Jay gatsbys life

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Why Gatsby

Why does myrtle want a German Shepherd?

 How did Gatsby know where Nick lived?

Why does Gatsby host huge parties that people he does not know go too?

Through the Smoke

 The little dog...
 sitting on the table looking with blind eyes through the smoke,
 from time to time groaning faintly.

 People disappeared,
 reappeared, made plans to go somewhere,
 then lost each other,
 searched for each other,
 found each other a few feet away.

Some time toward midnight
Tom Buchanan and Mrs. Wilson stood face to face 
discussing in impassioned voices...

(F.Scott Fitzgerald pg41)